D2 - reviewing progress on a personal development plan

feedback
here is a link to the feedback sheet

what i was asked to change 
after i made my PDP i was asked to change a few things to improve it. on the feed back sheet i was told that i needed to give more information from other units. this was because i only included information about unit 40. to fix this i looked on the unit specification

another thing i needed to add to my PDP was dates. although this was not on the feedback sheet i received i noticed that i was missing dates on certain parts of my PDP. to change this i worked out the dates for each peace of work and filled in the missing dates and filled it in.

what was good about my PDP
on the feedback sheet i was told that my work was very consistent and the obstacles where clearly shown and easy to follow. this was good but i still had to make sure to keep my work consistent when writing about other subjects and i had to make sure the obstacles where still clearly shown for the other units.